I fought the urge to love you
fate intervened
I lay my heart into your hands
hold it close
eternally
Author notes
Spontanious Heart by ~karille
20 words
A contest entry
- Double points Quickie 2 ~ Unsigned by Unsigned.
600 points, ended May 15, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I know you and I know your writing...you my sister have a heart that is the same size as mine and I love you for it...and that blue flower is so you!
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Thank you for bronze big guy..
Linda -
Damn lol can't hide a thing from you lmao
love you too dear brother
Linda
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Now you've made me cry.
It's beautiful, full of loving tenderness and trust.
Best of luck.
Love Margaret
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That's so sweet of you to say, I actually had to think fast as I got sick just as I entered ( dang pain meds) ..so I had to hurry... wasn't what I wanted to write, but there it is anyway. Thank you sooooo much.
Linda
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good
i like it its really good even thou its short its rite out there and i like it u did a good job with diss one -
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Thank you, that's very kind of you.
Linda
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