The water was cold
The sand was hot
The perfect beach day
That’s what I thought
But who was I to know
A wicked plot would take place
When I awakened from my nap
There was red skin on my body and face
I didn’t know what to do
I was going insane
I couldn’t stand the thought
Of going through this pain
I went to my parents
And got a lotion bath
I should have used sunscreen
But I just faced the sins wrath
So now I lay in pain
Trying not to cry
Instead of going through this pain
I think I’d rather die
Author notes
Prompt writing for the sencond round of a contest. Hope you enjoy it even though its super short.
Prompt: Sunburned
A contest entry
- Next Round by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The prompt was hard. I will give you that much. so i will give a little higher then eagle, because I see how hard it was. I give you a 88%
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Thank you^_^
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I say 70%
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Hello.
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Sunburned. This should be interesting lol.
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