Do you believe in the power of a perfect moment?
Do you believe in a perfect kiss?
Cascading light of neon glow
blooming in your eyes.
Your body a beautiful canvas.
My hands ache to explore
every naked facet,
wet and raw and sweet.
Cupping the back of your head,
gently pulling your hair.
Kissing you tenderly,
nibbling on your lips.
Awash in the beautiful moment,
a fusion of ache and lust and heat.
Torrent of rock hard passion,
I whisper in your ear.
Shuddering, gasping fusion of love,
hard and pure and swallowed deep.
Screaming out to you,
joined in sweat soaked bliss.
Tangled, blissful, exhausted.
I softly caress your cheek,
peering into one another's eyes.
A stolen perfect moment in time.
A contest entry
- Beautifully Sensual. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended June 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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i believe in the perfect moment. wow very strong piece!
i loved it!
xoxxo zoe <3 -
ooh im sure so many people and i believe in this perfect moment, this is so beautiful and the scheme of the poem,
stayed there throughout the whole poem,
my favourite part of the poem was this:
Cupping the back of your head,
gently pulling your hair.
Kissing you tenderly,
nibbling on your lips.
Awash in the beautiful moment,
a fusion of ache and lust and heat.
Torrent of rock hard passion,
I whisper in your ear.
its just so sensually beautiful
all my love,
kitty -
Oh how I believe!
Yet again, you stun me with your words.
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wow beautifully written erotic piece. Really oozed the sensual seduction and lust. A favourite I think. Excellent job
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that was intense, but very good. Very descriptive. I liked it! You are a good poet!
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The last line ties everything together
just perfectly.
good luck. -
Hot!
I found myself reading it faster as it got hotter towards the end. I like it. I like the way you use words without making every line a sentence..."Tangled, blissful, exhausted"...it give the impression of the breathlessness of the moment. Very well done...alby
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Ahh!! this was really nice and romantic in the begining and then at the end it heats up!! I like it!!! lol.. You did a great job hun..
Jetleena
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