She's a martyred woman who made a contract with the lord
In the next life comin' is gonna be her just reward
With a soul so bright, brighter than a nova star
You can see her singin', hidin' all those martyr scars
Just gotta get closer to the fire
So I can explain
All those sins I have committed in her name
I just gotta say here
I will not pretend
I'll send my prayers to heaven
Once again
I am so indebted to you
My martyred friend
I am an empty vessel so fill me once more
I'll be the lamb to win you over and to score
You know I have the willpower and I have the means
To ride that storm to heaven on angel wings
And set the world on fire with the love I bring
Just gotta get closer to the fire
So I can explain
All those sins I have committed in her name
I just gotta say here
I will not pretend
I'll send my prayers to heaven
Once again
I am so indebted to you
My martyred friend
So my Lady Covenant, sweet child of the dawn
Whose secrets lie in tales untold before the world was born
The truth is hidden from us we are all just strangers here
And I will keep my own council until the way is clear
Just gotta get closer to the fire
So I can explain
All those sins I have committed in her name
I just gotta say here
I will not pretend
I'll send my prayers to heaven
Once again
I am so indebted to you
My martyred friend
Author notes
username: myriad-dark
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nice flow and story line. Quite unique. Great job.
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I will comment once the contest is nearly finished
best of luck
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-midgetbridgey -
Amazing. I loved your religious motif that you used. It was amazing. Beautiful write.
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Nice flow in this poem you create a vivid story!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
darlintlc -
this has the feel of a very lryical song... i can picture a few singers who could pull it off... and in my mind they sing it rather well thank you for sharing good luck in the compitition and i will be back soon to drop off my muse and enter too
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