As the flames ignite,
realization hits,
a flicker of light
You've saved the world.
Author notes
This is about the scene in the last episode of Buffy where she grabs Spikes hand and their hands go up in flames.
A contest entry
- Make me fly or come with me in the dark by subliminal girl.
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Comments
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Powerful lines, thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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I was thinking more superheros here...but I guess, Spike could be a hero. =] =] And Buffy!!
Okay...
"So" could be "As" in the first line...or even get rid of the word altogether if you felt like it.
Very simple, but the message is wrought out clearly..
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