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Accepted In Time

The stars bleed
midnight
for eyes inclined
to look above at heaven's
might

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  • james119
    May 16, 2008

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    I like the strong picture this paints.
    eyes inclined too (to?)
    inclined works for either tending to or raise upward Good write
    The spiritual aspect is strong in the truth it reveals
    Thanks for entering


    • Weltt
      May 16, 2008
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      oops! thanks for pointing out that little typo that i might fix it.