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Modern haiku



Clouds in the sky,
each a new experience



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  • Samplette gold member
    May 16

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    I've never seen an haiku with only two lines, only three. Even modern. Plenty of time to add that "aha" last line. Thank you for entering.
    Sam

  • SafeRefuge
    May 15

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    A haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that combine three different lines and a noticeable grammatical break. The break, or kireji, is often replaced with commas or hyphens in English haiku. Haiku usually includes nature and everyday things. The first line with five syllables, the second line with seven syllables and the third line with five syllables. It may take some time and substitution of words to make it fit.