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As Nature Intended

Warm your breath breezes across my bare skin.

Flooding the valleys of my body with need.

Lasting heat of your kisses deep within,

Sun kissed emotion the flames of lust feed. 

Union of lovers, the world suspended,

Together joined as nature intended. 

 

 

 

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Picture Credit: Magic Mountain by Hans Peter Kolb

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  • theredcatjazzoflove
    May 19, 2008

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    very very delicious poem here i think you did a very great job penning this piece you really blew me away with this

  • silverfish
    May 16, 2008

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    the poem flows well, naturally i would say, and marries the peaks and valleys of erotic imagination with the poetic rhythms of love making. i find your verse more evocative of sensual realms than the illustration. -silverfish


  • KayJay
    May 16, 2008

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    Sensual (Naturally)

    I love the flow and rhyme of this... it has passion and sensuality that comes naturally from the prompt. What a satisfying piece you've created. Thank you for a terrific entry...
    Ken


    • Corvus Corone
      May 16, 2008
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      Thank you for a brilliant picture to work from Ken that really does help a writer like myself.

      Jem xx

  • The Poetic Angel
    May 15, 2008

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    butiful Jems m'Lady

    loves tha last line

    loves You

    xxx Your angel xxx

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