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Bubblegum and Pop Rocks

Missing image
Exploding candy
sizzles

fizzles
tingles

mingles
with strawberry bubbles

Author notes

At host request: "Llama Salmon"

It may be short but it is definitely sweet.

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Comments


  • Balashi13
    June 19

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    If one reads the poem really fast you get the same fun sensation as having a pop rock in your mouth!

  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 27

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    This is cute

    Oh those pop rocks I remember those and bubblegum it was the best and made good fishing bait as well haha you only had to bait your hook once


  • Deathless1
    May 19

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    this is great!!!!

    i love the girly side this brings out of the reader.
    you just can't help but want a peace.lol

    love the picture to, i would never thought of bubble gum and pop rock form it.

    great ever thing,
    KNIGHT TIME


  • Doggy Lover
    May 15
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    sweet it is,
    I LOVE ♥♥♥ THIS POEM!!!!!!