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she picks off dry sunspots that litter her damaged skin |
Author notes
Picture prompt.
"insane" by la-distancia
A contest entry
- double points quickie ~ Unsigned by Unsigned.
600 points, ended May 15, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the direction you took with the prompt.
The first thing I saw was freckles across her nose but didn't know what to say about them.
Margaret
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Interesting take. I like it! I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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h0ow interesting and how insightful...this is in fact a self portrait, I found it captivating...I love what you did with it..
Unsigned
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Aw that's sad. Relates to the picture prompt.
You've presented it nicely.
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I like the imagery - even without the picture, the wording used to construct the image in the readers mind is well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Great take on prompt ~ best of luck hun
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