Tick Tock,
A neverending,
Sound - reassuring though,
The ticking machine's frail heart beat,
Tick Tock,
Driving,
Itself into,
Madness - it's still alive,
Trying to die but it survives,
Tick tock.
A contest entry
- Inanimate Objects... by surface--tension.
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Yeah...
Comments
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wow.. greta imaginary in the clock.. really good! enjoyed it a lot!
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a very interesting and thought provoking write. Great Job.
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wow
wow that is really good...i love it
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i agree- very creepy, but creative. just a ?- don't mean to b personal- but does every poem have to do w/ dying? it makes an easy topic tho, so i get where u're coming from if that's true xD i think love is an extremely easy topic 4 me! anyway, <3 it!
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wow, creeeeeeeeepy. but strangely, enlightening. hmmmmm.... i have to go think this over. lol well done [:
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