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Dance With Me

Dance with me, under the moon;
the rhythm of a melodious tune.
Beneath the blanket of celestial light ~
dance with me, hold me tight.


Sing me a song of words soft and sweet;
make me weak, lift me off my feet.
Take me to the heavens high up above ~
sing me a song of passion and love.


Write me the stars, enchanted with bliss;
stealing moments of divinity's kiss.
I'll look in your eyes, forever and a day ~
write me the stars, in your arms, I'll stay.


Dance with me, this music we hear;
erasing away these things that we fear.
I'll pray inside that you feel it too ~
dance with me, I want to dance with you.

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  • i know this feeling through memories past of once lived tears all to well wanting to feel the love that shines within our hearts. may yours always reign!!! much love and many blessings always xxx


  • Ronztrek gold member
    June 26

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    Delightful!

    Such a beautiful and playful write, words that dance right across the page. I really enjoyed this read filled with such delightful passion that makes us all want to get out and dance with you. You have done an excellent job with this up-spirited piece. Thanks for sharing!

     

    Ron *rose*

  • Wow...I clicked onto this accidentally (I dont generally care for love poems) and before I had a chance to back out and find something more my style...You hooked me with your first few lines.

    Truly a beautiful write.

    "Write me the stars, enchanted with bliss;
    stealing moments of divinity's kiss....."

    Gorgeous lines. Almost makes me wish I could dance. (almost, lol) .....another GREAT write.

    • Thank you kindly. I've had some pretty good inspiration. Glad you enjoyed reading this.

      Storm
  • And what a Dance Partner

    I've loved every dance so far Beautiful!
    And this is quite a tribute to the enchanted time of kicking up our feet to spend special time together.
    I wonder if it's the same music - but these words seem to confirm that our dance will last!
    Loved the words and feelings behind them!

    Tang

    • You been the best dance parnter around darlin! Here's hoping the music plays on and you'll keep the lead!
      Thank you for all the beautiful dances under those stars.

  • Oh, this is such a wistful and lovely poem. I wish I wrote this...

    Like the background. Looks like a version of Dove's warp.

    • Thank you Joyce. The background was all from scratch, but seeing Dove's gave me the idea, lol.
      Appreciate your comments hun.

      Storm

  • Swan song gold member
    May 18
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    This was lovely and could almost be sung.
    Very strong rhythm and a poem that was a joy to read


  • Curtkf
    May 15

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    Really Excellent

    This is wonderful work, simple yet elegant, straight up front, but with deep emotion packed inside. Stanza three is magical. Way to go with this one.

    • Hey Curt, long time no see.
      Thanks for the comments, most appreciated. Hope all is good with you.

      Storm
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