Every time I look at you
I feel a feeling that feels untrue.
Sitting on a bench with an intertwined hand,
Ain't love grand?
Being able to just sit and talk
Or not speak when we walk,
Love has its lows and highs,
But I love those little butterflies.
A contest entry
- Way awesome prompt contest. by livia michelle.
500 points, ended May 24, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very sweet
I really like this
because everybody (especially girls) can relate to those butterflies
awesome write & good luck -
ok cool
your prompt options are:
-it's those butterflies again
-life in the fast lane
-breathe in the moment
-left for dead
-a million pictures
just pick whichever one you like the best and make sure to mention it in the author's notes
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