How do you balance a life full of pain?
Or how do you live a life after death?
Life is full of both death and life
Along with love,sorrow and strife.
My life is like this even though I'm loved
But my family's slowly falling apart.
The parent's and grandparent's fight and yell
I wonder how the kids and I do so well.
But one thing leads to another
Then that leads to something worst.
Us kids are filled with painful dreams
And soon the kids cry sorrow filled streams.
What is love but sweet sorrow
What is sorrow but great pain.
What is pain but gentle tears
And what are tears but great fears.
Love brings pain and sorrrow
Hatrid brings wars and death.
If forced to chose between them
I would chose to be condemned.
A life alone is such a sweet sound
But one without one is so quiet.
Will I actually live to see tomarrow
In this life with pain filled sorrow.
A contest entry
- [[.Courtesy of a Raven's Blood.]] by Soten-Jaganshi.
1600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 58 entries
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What is love but sweet sorrow
What is sorrow but great pain.
What is pain but gentle tears
And what are tears but great fears.
that was amazing! awsome write
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I absolutely love it. It's beautiful though tragic. I particularly loved the lines:
"Love brings pain and sorrrow
Hatrid brings wars and death.
If forced to chose between them
I would chose to be condemned."
They made me shiver
Spectacular idea, Wonderful writing!
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very nice
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great poem oni-chan ...keep going
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this is really good darling, the only thing i can point out is the change of rhyme, but that kinda makes it cool,i love this poem yeah i do i love it,
keep penning,
all my love, your friend,
kitty
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