a voice,your voice
i felt i was on a wave
i felt i was a wave
i was warm and smooth and soflty flowing towards the shore
then i got there and i crashed
in a magical woosh...
and i felt i was spreading,
becoming each and every single drop of water,
each and every grain of sand...
i became the sea,
the shore,
everything...
Author notes
yet another trip =)
?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
if this was your torino experience than u must have had fun.... i thought it was a funny piece....
lov ya
take care
and by the way i love the way u freely wrote the lines... just free
hehehehehe
mwa
-
simple and amazing.. and definitely another wonderful trip
~rana~
-
i'm sorry amigo but torino is closer to the alps than it is to the sea, how the hell did you find waves there? are you sure you were a wave and not an avalanche?
nice write.
Elie
-
-
hahahahaha amigo the torino i'm talking about is not in europe it's in gemeyzeh which is very close to the sea but still it doesnt matter if i were in the middle of the ocean or on the himalayas,when the quantum leap happens it happens
-
-
aah i like the imaginary in this one.. the simplicity of the words nd the complexity of the dream ..
niceeyy !!
PS dnt burn ur ass off
-
The title is pretty accurate, it really does feel like an experience. Very simple, very beautiful, I could literally imagine every single word you wrote. I feel like going to the beach now :^)
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
