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beyond nothing

Missing image

Blossom littered gravel with

Stands of encroaching trees

crunch beneath my boots

as I trudge along the road.

 

Shaded by their nearness

the trees keep me in coolness

as a  light breeze sends birds

singing their songs into the air.

 

No cars approach, I meet no one

on this solitary journey

down a different road

towards nothing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • penman gold member
    August 3, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Whispering Wind gold member
    June 17, 2008

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    To some this would seem so lonely and going no where but to me it has a feeling of  peace  and contentment...no cars and no one to bother...sighs...niaish for the walk on such a beautiful road


  • blue-eyedbabe
    May 21, 2008

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    every road goes somewhere...

    it's sad. but no road goes to nowhere...i like the descriptions. you can't walk alone when you bring us there with you so well


  • Missy3
    May 17, 2008
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    I know that road

    Truly I do, towards....well not nothing....but hmm


  • shepherd23
    May 15, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry!

    crunching and trudging and solitary - you are making a lonely trip indeed

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