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How lovely...

I noticed your sky-blue eyes,
Which remind me a bit of pies.
Your cute little nose,
Which looks like a rose
(As big as ones prose)
Your white shining pearls
(Which are really your teeth)
Sometimes they look like a cliff.
Let me mention your hair
Which is almost bare...
Well, you're just a nightmare,
But i love you with all my heart still.
(Maybe because you pay for my bill)

Author notes

I wrote this on Valentine day after being depressed for the whole day because no-one gave me a Valentine

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  • Lexie
    May 17
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    LOL! the ending was pretty neat. i like this poem you have hear. it's unique.
  • adzoa
    May 15
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    congrat

    oh what a wonderful art work. You deserve the gold.