Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

fixing broken bridges

walk along the path i have made
look upon all the hurt and pain
i took you for granted and for that i regret
all i seem to be good for is braking bridges
i try to fix them but i can't do it alone
i need you there by me to be able to do the impossible
i love you i need you i hurt you and for that i will always regret
will you mend this bridge we have continually broke?
love life all thinks possible i cant do it on my own
if i knew what i was getting myself into when i did it i might have watched my step
but as you well know im a stupid person at times i kept falling in the cracks
limping my way through instead of asking for you not the best judgement i have had here resently
im sorry for braking this bridge cailtyn please help me mend it
i can not do it alone
it will take time im not perfect we'll have stones to move that'll be in our way
but i think with you by my side anything is possibele

sorry for all thata pain i put on you

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

  • This is truly deep in emotion. I felt alot of pain and heartbreak in the words. Its sad at most, i know how it feels to be in a situation, only i must say my ex's never wanted to help fix the bridges so i was alone doing so...but anyhow this was a very great write, Keep up the good work lassie.

    Sincerely,
    Deathwolf Tasagka


  • kitty23
    May 15

    Edit | Reply
    i want to mend our bridges to i love you so much i wish we both would have watched our steps maybe then we wouldn't have been hurt so bad.

    i love you i really do i dont know what more you want for me though i cant do it own my own eighter
    so if your not commiting yourself

    and i mean all of you
    every part of you
    then forget it but if you do then
    i will try my best to make it better between us
    i dont want this to be another what if
    for us
    we have to many of those and im through with them i want this to be a great thing i want you emotionally visically and everything else that i can have.

    thank you for writing this beautiful poem for me
    i truelly love it
    keep up the great work

    KITTY