perfect is the night
to sink in tall grass
oblivious to all
but the indigo sky
and stars above us
Author notes
20 Words exactly
Picture Prompt
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Spectacularly done!
The back ground sets the mood,the words paint the picture ... and i might add the sight of falling stars is liken to a BEAUTIFUL sunrise or sunset,and i would bet if seen from "your special place" it too would be spectacular!
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Excellent
Wow, what an incredible background to go with your poem. So wonderfully done. Thank you for sharing.
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thats really nice i can imagine a starry nite like in the picture so u did good with teh imagry
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I love this!
But now what can I do!
For we are both
in the same contest
and I loved your poem too!
This is beautiful in its simplicity. By that I mean it paints a picture we can all relate to and love. Well done and good luck my friend!
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hmmmm live and learn I had always thought that indigo was a red, I stand corrected it is grayish blue, good write
Thank you for your entry and best of luck in the judging
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Beautiful. i like the sinking and the looking up.
Marlene -
a beautifully soothing picture you paint. I dare say you must be quite good at haiku's. Good luck in the contest.
Michelle
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Even without the image, you words paint the entire scene well. Perhaps an even better one. I would have liked to have seen more than 20 words here. The contests for short poems are becoming a bit constrictive in imagination I think. Anyway, good luck in the contest.
JLG
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This is short and sweet but certainly doesn't lack anything in imagery or emotion. Your soft side never fails to show through in everything you pen. Good luck to you in the contest!
~Midnight Lace
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I like the image this paints. It seems fitting. So calm and serene. All you need now is a quilt, 2 glasses and a bottle of wine. Good luck girl!
TxCowgirl -
Very fitting
Some good thoughts going there.Always a pleasure to read you.
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