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Your Voice

Soft summer nights
filled with the promise
of life changing things.

Sighs of wonder
of gentle, unexplored passion.
As the crickets led a chorus
of magic in the night.

I hear your voice, still,
as it whispers sweet promises
of as yet unknown delight.
Like sweet honey it flows over me
warming, soothing, enticing.
I close my eyes and I hear the music
it plays in my heart even now.
Your voice was the soundtrack of my summer.

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  • shepherd23
    May 15, 2008
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    a journey of sight and of sound
    "it plays in my heart even now."
    very nice


  • livia michelle
    May 15, 2008
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    aww very sweet
    reminds me of a teenage love

    "I close my eyes and I hear the music
    it plays in my heart even now"

    my favorite line, for sure

    awesome write & good luck

  • livia michelle
    May 15, 2008

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    alright let me pull some cool quotes out of my hat for you

    drum roll please...
    your choices are:: (please putr the one you pick in the author's notes)

    - “When facism comes to America it will be wrapped in the flag and carrying a cross.”
    -"Your voice was the soundtrack of my summer"
    -“I reject your reality and substitute it for my own.”
    - “I have met a lot of hardboiled eggs in my time, but you're twenty minutes.”
    -"I will get you!"

    hope you find one of the prompts inspiring