i envy you so,
i envy how much you
like to make yourself
look like a fool.
i envy the fact that
your a lost sole
i evny your a slut
who likes to blow
oh how i envy
you day after day
envy the fact that
im to afraid, how im
not completly straight
how infact your just
a motherfucking cunt face
A contest entry
- Envy anybody? by Ace13.
570 points, ended May 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i tried to make it ryme as best i can lol..umm but yea
Comments
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WOW VERY POWERFUL, ANGRY WRITE! I love how the emotion jumps out of the screen and grabs you by the throat. Very good write!
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whos the motherfucking cuntaface???? do i know her?????
its cat!!!!!!!!!!!! wait shes a cunface she likes to blow she has no soul ne way
dez dont give a fuck about people like that their not worth it
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needs better rhyme scheme and need to work on the flow and remember that the point was to be humorous...well you did get the cruel part right
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