When the noise around us fades away
And my eyes are locked to yours
The words I desperately need to say
They flee from me and wander astray
And there is nothing for me but to do what I can
With a kiss
An embrace
With a stroke to your cheek and a nuzzle or two
Can you hear what my emotion is singing to you?
You are a word I can't pronounce with my clumsy mortal tongue
You are the brightest gorgeous painting made by the hand of the sun
You are the perfume of a flower that no soil could support
You are the flavor of a food beyond any money's worth
You are the sensate living sturdy softness that stupefies my nerves
You are a person, but so much more, for you there is no word
Judiciousness is in your gaze
Undying love your art
Stars and moonlight sing your praise
The perfection in every part
I need to sit beside you for the rest of my life
Nothing matters more to me than becoming your wife.
A contest entry
- Persona Poems. by unmasked synergy.
1500 points, ended June 7, 18 entries
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Hope you enjoyed it
Comments
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you did well in conveying passion here, a bit cliche in parts, but ok. I would however put some order to the random rhyming
thanks alot for entering here
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amazing job, again.
very passionate, i love it. -
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Thanks I have my fiancee to thank for this piece- he is my muse. <3 In case you didn't see it the last stanza is his name acrostically. (Is acrostically a word?)
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yes. thanks for entering.very well written. great job.
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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