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still waiting

i feel so big
but yet so small
i have no gown
i have no ball

as i bite into
the apple's skin
a can't help but stop and wonder
what fairytale i'm in

and here i am
still and cold
waiting
when will my story be told?

there seem to be
no happily ever after
no kissing in the sunset
and no loving laughter

Author notes

snow white - gemoth (goth and emo....mixed!!!)

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  • black hearted rebel
    May 15, 2008
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    Great write...I like the twist!Thanks for entering!

  • VampMattLovesJesus
    May 15, 2008

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    wow, gemoth. i always used phrases such as emoth, or gothmo. lol. i'm lame like that. this is a really good write though.

    ~MRH~