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Four Legs

Four legs run upon this land
now forgotten beyond the sea of people
but never forgotten in my heart
tha most beautiful race of perfect creatures
becoming lost and extint
far before cars and man
they're smart
they cry when their love dies
they smile when their children are born
they know when they're in danger
they're more smart than any human
because of their four legs...

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I was reading a poem on here and it inspired me...

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  • DawnKestrel
    May 19, 2008

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    Nice.
    Good luck in my contest!


  • ennovy silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    'Tis surely true thou art the wolf queen, sharing their lives. Thy love paints of beauty. Eternally and forevermore. Excellent poem in tribute of the wolf."
    Write more......novy


  • Zombieh
    May 15, 2008
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    awww

    that's really sweet. good poem.