i hate your guts,
i hope you know.
i want you to go SPLAT.
and let it all show.
all of your lies,
and all of your hate,
because now i know
that i was the bate.
i wish i could tear you apart,
inside and out.
rip open your haart,
then i would shout.
a laugh like death
would fill your ears
and i promis you know,
it would be the last thing youd hear
and to tell you why
i hate you so much
its these words you gave me
that cold deadly touch.
never more than a few words
given to me,
except 'i hate you'
well, now you'll see.
im better than you,
and all your old stuff.
i'm making it too,
AND im getting rough.
A contest entry
- Envy anybody? by Ace13.
570 points, ended May 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hmm... what do you think?
Comments
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jordan?? if so hes not that mean!
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it was pretty good
Well it did have origionality and cruelty but it wasn't really funny and i am looking for all three. well good luck: -
lots of rage being poured out, lots of feeling. written very well with a great rhyme and flow. good job on this.
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