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Angel In Disguise

Missing image
Laughing and giggling
while watching her favorite show
Bringing smiles too my face
makes my love only grow

Such a beauty
my angel in disguise
An amazing gift From God
sent to save my life

Though only three years old
so much wiser than her years
She breathes new life into me
and chases away my fears

Whether she is dancing
or running all around
My little Jasmine is a blessing
I am so lucky to have found

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I hope this is alright for your contest Picture above is of my daughter Jasmine please do not copy picture or my poem without my permission, thanks

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  • wendymolly
    June 14, 2008
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    AS CUTE AS IT MAY EVER GET! YOUR A FINALIST!


  • xxhoopstar21xx
    June 9, 2008

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    wow!

    Wow! Very pretty!! you have a very cute daughter!! it is obvious you love your daughter very much in this poem. very good choise of words! good luck in the contests!!

    *clapp*

    SilverWolf
    *HOOOOWWLL*


  • Re-invention silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    wow thisi s gorgeous! so beautiful a way a child can change someone so deeply! great job!


    • tawk gold member
      June 8, 2008
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      She is my gift from God such a blessing to me and my husband. We are the lucky ones to have her in our lives. Thanks for your wonderful comments.


  • Desire gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Precious!!

    Aaaaaaaaw how Precious and Gosh they grow so fast too

    Love how You shared Treasured moments with her with us
    Definitely an Angel
    Love the rhyme too

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks my dear friend for your wonderful comments I just wrote from the heart and wherever it takes me I put on paper. Thanks again I will be down to your page soon. Theresa


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    she is beautiful

    angel in disquise

    I can relate.

    precious write

    God bless...


    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your kind and lovely comments. I am so lucky to have her in my life. Theresa


  • Breaking Inside
    May 16, 2008

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    children are certainly Angels In Desguise, they are so beautiful and loving, sometimes it is a shame that they have to grow up this is a very beautiful poem thank you so much for entering i really enjoyed it.

    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks again for the gold! Thanks for hosting such a wonderful contest Theresa


  • thejollytinker
    May 16, 2008

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    I wish I could find my picture of Justine, they look like sisters! Nice thoughts, she's a corker for sure.

    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind comments they mean so much too me


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    This is absolutely precious, and I just adore all of the beautiful photos of Jasmine. She truly is you Angel from God. I feel that way about my children also. They keep me going, even now - and they are well into their 20's. I can tell you are really into the picture taking like I always was. I never wanted to lose a minute. It is all so fast and fleeting. Such a lovely poem that you wrote for her; you are both blessed to have each other. This should do well in the contest! Lots of Love, Karen


    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks Karen your words mean so much too me Yes I always am taking pictures can't seem to get enough lol. Thanks for the wonderful comments and for just being you Theresa


  • LittleMoon silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    Beautiful words and wonderful photos for such a charming little girl. When she reads this as an adult in the future, when she is a mother too, she will really understand the unconditional love of a mother and know how lucky she was to have it as not everyone does. You should be so proud of this and her. I can't seem to get the clappies on.


    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your very kind comments they mean the world too me Yes I have many poems I have written for her and I even started a daily journal even before she was born while my husbands sister was carrying her in her womb. She is the light of my life. Thanks again Theresa


  • WolfHeart
    May 15, 2008

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    AAwww, she's Gammy's angel too!! Precious poem for a precious little wonder. Isn't God good to put such joy in life. Terrific poem and well-written. Hug her for me.


    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Mom thanks for your wonderful comments we are so lucky to have her in our lives and you in ours. Love you Theresa

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    She is getting so big She is just precious she looks as big as Genna is lol She is just beautiful Hi Jasmine


    • tawk gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks sis she is already over 42 inches tall! and 3 and half years old lol she is so big and tall for her age she already is wearing size 5 clothes lol. Thanks again sis have a wonderful day love Theresa

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