past deires bring us together
is this just a fake irony within ourselves
when you wish to be back
when you want it so badly
but no matter how hard you try
it doesn't seem to happen
you push and you push
you try and you try
but it won't happen will it
it'll stay away won't it
won't you take my hand tonight?
you wish for a return
but you get a swift departure
your erotic old ways
mean nothing anymore
they mean shit don't they?
he sits so closely to the screen of pure hope
but he lingers so far in a place with no dreams
when you dream of desires
and you wish to be back
you get nothing but heartaches
and mistake looks
Author notes
rawr rawr dinosawr...
A contest entry
- Love That Just Wasn't Meant To Be by BlackSwan.
550 points, ended May 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good write. I liked how you reflected lines such as...
"you push and you push
you try and you try" -This strongly emphasizes the message of your write.
--> spelling kiddo, go over it
-Thank you for your entry, Angi Terese
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