oh, but it is not as it seems
in my wishful dreams
I feel passion and rapture
imagination captured
but not anxious with greed
for satisfying a need
I dream of soft laughter
the kind coming after
in walks through the wood
just breathing feels good
or just sitting still
and feeling fulfilled
my dreams are of this
no hug or passionate kiss
just living and growing
with open hearts showing
true peace of the soul
the ultimate goal
such thoughts always do
lead straight back to you......
Author notes
My idea of love.
Responding to CJ.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love of a Lifetime by Star Shine.
1050 points, ended May 27, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so soft and compelling. I love the way you address all the thoughts of what makes the love worth casting over distances. The title is perfect. And, the last line, the ultimate goal, such thoughts always do lead straight back to you.
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Passions says:
Well done and I love it. Great job my dear.
Love you
Passions
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*smile* Once again beauty flows from the quill of the ancient master. A quill that serves as a key unlocking a portal to your heart and soul allowing we poor mortals to access to the fantasy of perfection that dwells in your inner self. We bow in homage to your omnipotence and splendor. For this honor, I bequeath to you my lord, three golden rabbits.
Love,
Amera♥
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This is very pretty, and the everyday ordinariness is much to be desired. These are sweet images like: "just breathing feels good". This is the best part of living with someone you love; best wishes.
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I adore this, very beautiful rhythm, lovely rhyme. It encompasses all that is love, passionate feeling and soulful depth. Well done. Thank you for this entry.
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Indeed a great work...
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