I understand how painfull this feels,
though I wish I did'nt.
And I'm sending you my,
most heartfelt condolences.
But just so you know,
Pain passes, Leaving fond memories.
Grief lifts, Leaving Happiness in it's wake.
Love never dies, and allows us to see them again.
So you know,
One day you will leave us.
And we will mourn for you,
As we now mourn for your other half.
But we will take pleasure in knowing,
That he was there waiting for you.
May the Stars Light Your Paths and Guide Your Feet to Each Other Once More.
DarkWind
A contest entry
- Share Your Love by StarEyes.
2150 points, ended June 2, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hope you like it pls use constructive critism
Comments
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thank you for your poem I am sorry I have not left a note. Life has been crazy lately. Thanks for reminding me i will see him. i like the thought love never dies. It brought a smile to my heart.
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Tis an easy favor for those that care for you to ask, and twas easy to pen. I understand pain, and greif, unfortanatly. But I also understand that they are trails to prove our faith and that all things happen for a reason. Heres to hoping life picks up, heh?
May the stars light your path.
DW
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Thanks for the entry into this contest! It is great! I love the message you have shared with Earthstar! I am sure she will love this as much as I do.
Best of luck in this contest!!
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Beautiful
So true this is and written with such tenderness Bravo
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