* * * * *The sheltered
Rich girl
Isn't ready
For the real world
Her phony friends
Finally drift
Leaving her universe
Just shattered
But the world
Can't stop.
When had she
Ever
Mattered?
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* * * * ** * * * * *
The sheltered
Rich girl
Isn't ready
For the real world
Her phony friends
Finally drift
Leaving her universe
Just shattered
But the world
Can't stop.
When had she
Ever
Mattered?
* * * * * *
* * * * *The sheltered
Rich girl
Isn't ready
For the real world
Her phony friends
Finally drift
Leaving her universe
Just shattered
But the world
Can't stop.
When had she
Ever
Mattered?
*
* * * * *A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Pic Inspired by Tattboyspet.
550 points, ended May 16, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nicely done!
lol - don't get me wrong, I'm no emo freak or anything of the kind, but the fact that you could bring out a 'slitting wrist' poem in such a funny pic says something about your writing skills
thank you for your entry
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A very terse portrayal of a sheltered, clueless young life, well done Alaka and best of luck in the contest hon.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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