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get out of my life

get out of my life!

i dont want you
and i don't whant your respect
i dont want you
in my life

get the hell out
of
my
life

i dont want you at all
and i don't whant your love
please
get out

stop askin for
...my love
you cheatin bitch
go dig your ditch

im tired of your lies
so now
i say
GOOD BYE!

stop with these lies
before i lose my mind
i'm tired of you talking
from behind

so many lies
all from you
you said i'm gay
i just don't know what to say!

stop lying
you
dumb
bitch

im ready to throw a punch
but for now i clutch
my fist are tight
so get out of my SIGHT!

now your askin for a fight
is this what you want
to fight
get out of my life!

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    May 15, 2008

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    well that is a lot of anger you got there. one remark i have to make is that you should use spellcheck. my favorite lines were,

    "stop with these lies
    before i lose my mind
    i'm tired of you talking
    from behind"

    Overall i liked this piece

    thank you for entering and good luck
    ~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~