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While in your arms…



Tied up to the strings of your desires, here I’m feeling the throbbing with the release of your infiltration.
You dismissing every other tear created by the violation to the scars of my obscure and superb past.
I scream only to motivate you on the insatiable thirst of pleasure, satisfied by the blood from the wounds of my scars.

I cry; only I’m not sure if it’s fear or delight.
I can see the joy in your face, every time you unbolt the legs to my distorted orgasm,
I’m begging you to slash the flesh for my benefit, and the satisfaction to your desires can’t stop; and hover up to penetrate me once again.

I cry; only I’m not sure if it’s fear or delight.

Tied up to the bed of your fantasies, you craft me into a slave for your needs.
I know I’m pleasing, only I’m not sure who.
The moaning continues, unraveling the pain towards the climax,
I’m hurting, I’m crying; I scream, craving you and the sadism I’ve inspired countless times before.

I cry; only I’m not sure if it’s fear or delight.

Dominate and I will submit;
Renew the scars to the trauma of my past; unbolt once again the legs to my distorted orgasm,
While in your arms… I cry; only I’m not sure if it’s fear or delight.

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  • hand-in-hand
    May 15, 2008

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    This is magnificent. The repitition of " I cry; only I'm not sure if it's fear or delight" ties every stanza together perfectly. The erotic nature of this painful story is so heart wrenching and yet painfull. Thank you for entering.


  • Galaxy2
    May 15, 2008

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    Wow...what a poem!
    'I cry; only I'm not sure if it's fear or delight.
    I can see the joy in your face, every time you unbolt the legs to my distoted orgasm'
    How splendid!....

    'Tied up to the bed of your fantasies, you craft me into a slave for your needs.
    I know I'm pleasing, only I'm not sure who'
    Great ideas! Beautifully expressed!

    'I'm hurting, I'm crying; I scream, craving you and the sadism I've inspired countless time before.'...
    Fantastic! Really fantastic, my dear!

    Kisses....

    Galaxy2


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