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The Feelings You Can Make In Me...

A golden opportunity
Finally placed in front of me
Coming in the form of you
I wonder what I'll do
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You move your hand and reach for mine
This action slowing all of time
The soft caress from your fingertips
Make my heartbeats dip
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And now I'm standing beside you
Still not knowing what to do
Then you pull me in to dance
I learn to take a chance
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You place my head upong your chest
Putting my inhibitions to rest
And as we spin around again
I'd have died happy in your arms then...

15/05/08

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Yes I bet you would. Very good