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Egg Drop Soup

egg drop soup
in my bowl

eye of chicken
in the middle

looks at me
does not blink

I am no longer hungry

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  • Shadow Life
    October 11, 2008
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    ~giggle

    This is a most interesting, and amusing poem! ^_^


  • myrataal silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    Eye eats me ...

    alive ...

    YAY

    Chicken now has insight.


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    June 3, 2008
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    My brother likes egg drop soup but Ive never seen chiken eyeballs in it...Lol. Nice poem!


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 3, 2008

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    Funny!!!!

    He he he!!! This was cute. I love egg drop soup but I don't know if I want it anymore. You take care. Thanks for the smile this morning. You take care, Sandy


  • Amera gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    This is a "smile" poem. You have created a wonderful image. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Shadow Life
    May 19, 2008
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    LOL!

    Oh, that hit my funny bone. It was a very well done short poem. Made my morning.


  • zigdaddy silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    Fun stuff!

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