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A Mage Tries to Seduce a Young Witch

  Now I impress her,
  Kiss and caress her
  In silks I dress her
      Witch in the wild.
  I hurt her, stress her,
  Stress and distress her,
  Enthrall and regress her,
      With my dark guile.
  I, the aggressor,
  Smother, oppress her,
  She is the lesser,
      Meek and so mild.
  No, I cannot suppress her,
  I have failed to assess her,
She leaves me for dead, this witch’s child!

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 6

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    Interesting and very dark!
    I love the inner rhyme and I like a change from your sonnets.
    Any more witches' poems ..send their links my way.

    I enjoyed this.. keep up the good work! No corrections Excellent work!!

    Nooni

  • Kiran silver member
    May 16

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    Michael this was brilliant..I loved the pace and rhyme. It was an excellent read!


  • Fantasy dream
    May 16

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    You are such a romantic, Sir. Even a witch seems a seduction. I am enjoying your poetry.


  • Melodies silver member
    May 15

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    Well, dear Sir Poet... that's what happens...

    If you try to seduce a young witch, she'll leave her mark on you. A wonderfully enchanting poem! Made me smile in amazement.