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[ As she raised her face toward the sky, ]

As she raised her face toward the sky,
She thought and wondered "Why?"
With all the angony she's had to bear
She finally realizes everything's not there...
An empty hole
Shot through her soul
Her hazel eyes cry flowing tears down her cheeks
Depression and her sadness has made her very weak
As she slices her wrists ever so slowly...
She knows what she's done is unholy
"Forgive me, my love," she whispered in her dying words
As the heavens above, the spirits sturred
Opening her eyes to the night
Her heart pounding the poison of fright
And what came out of that day
Was something heart-wrenching the people always say
The night the princess committed suicide
Something in her lover's heart did indeed die
His hate grew against the world every day
Knowing that his love has gone astray
After sometime, the prince's day to die was on the way
Knowing his time on the earth wasnt going to stay
Closing his eyes, he could see her
focusing on her face, because her wasnt quite sure
"Come to me, my love" she said
And as the servants came to wake him
They found the prince and the princess, embracing each other, sleeping eternally but... dead

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  • LoveDeprived
    May 16, 2008

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    amazing, sinisterly beautiful,, your words blew my mind away, inflaming me with the desire to continue and continue and be trap oh trapped by your rhymes, and invisioning the deadly scenery you create through your write,,,, aplauses ^^,


  • inhisimage
    May 15, 2008
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    this poem is amazing keep it up girl

  • sin
    May 15, 2008
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    i love it!!!

    Your really great


  • Tercil gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    sounds like a paternal thing, a new beginning? awwww, quite sad¬!


  • Life Is A Game
    May 15, 2008
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    nice

    i liked it alot. the imagry was cool and the thought prosses was pretty awsome too.

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