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Virgin Tea (Suggestive)

Billowing cigarette smoke
On the morning after
Memories of membranes broke
So I am now convinced
Over savory crackers
Nothing like the smell of innocence

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  • Deathless1
    May 20

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    staight to the point, and that is good.lol

    a little funny, at least i think so.

    great write,
    KNIGHT TIME

    ps
    have a happy trophy!


  • Bean Sidhe
    May 15

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    LOVELY. Short, simple and incredibly thought provoking. That moment is over so quickly and deserves a bit more notice. I am wondering if put any deliberation into writing from a male or female aspect? It works well from the female point of view, in my very humble opinion. Good luck in the contest!


  • KayJay46 gold member
    May 15

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    Wonderful imagery with just enough not said to allow the reader to imagine.... Well done, Steve...
    Ken

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 15
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    This is great.


  • Tattboyspet gold member
    May 15
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    DAMN!!!!!!
    whoa!
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