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Savior

Whispers
Of times gone by without a breath
Silence
In times where I once wept

You swept in
Collecting my heart's shattered pieces
Treating it like a precious jewel
When it is but shattered glass

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It's short, but it means so much.
Ily Bby.
4.23.08

Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?

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  • Claudia Incognito
    July 18, 2008

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    It's short...but I like it Theres just something about it and I can't put my finger on it...it's just...I don't know ^^ <3