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torture me is wrong

when you torture me it is wrong,
I cry at night wondering why,
I want to know if you really love me,
and to be there for me,
I want to know,
I have loved her for a long time,
now she has moved on,
I cant live without her,
cause when I think of her I start to cry.

she is everything to me,
torturing me is wrong

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  • There's an old joke - "Women are like buses. If you miss one, another one will be along in about fifteen minutes." My advice would be to look at your romantic life as an adventure. You are young. There will be many more loves before you find the grand one, or maybe it will be the next woman you meet, or maybe the one you wrote about here will come back. Nothing is completely over until somebody dies. Where there's life, there's hope, and change. Roll with it and enjoy the ride.

    Good luck,

    Alfred


  • Warrior7 Greeters member
    May 16

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hello tomanderson69,

    This is a very heartfelt poem, it's not easy when someone breaks your heart and i'm sorry your hurting right now, but keep writing.

    Andy - Site Greeter