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Jamestown Chronicle

 

 

 

We hung the bastard by his thumbs
strapped lead to his chicken legs
stretched him till he snapped and told us
that he'd gutted his wife
sugared and ate her

Such things are not uncommon now

They tied Ratcliff to a tree
the squaws lit a fire between his thighs
and carved his flesh with mussel shells
fried it,
fed it to their dogs

They of course weren't starving
they did it for fun

Revenge?
This hunger
this pestilence
this plague of hostiles

Hubris?
Are we punished then for daring something new?
The Old World is tired, look at it
wheezing by on cruthches, excreting corruption

So what that we freeze (did I mention that)
almost naked, firewood long gone
or that we now feast on our own
the weak, the maimed, the discontents

So what that the savages fear us, loath us
seize and torture us
if we are foolish and leave the pallisade

where we hang the twitching bodies
of all who give up hope

 

 

 

 

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  • celadia
    May 17, 2008
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    I think you're dean on that the old world is full of corruption, you've studied native history, haven't you? I think like anyone else who has, you've learned that there are better standards to live by, than what is offered in the old world. I like the history and the thoughtfulness of this piece.


  • Amera gold member
    May 17, 2008
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    Wow! This is amazing and as dark as it is I didn't want it to stop. I'm amazed at how you buought this to life with emotion.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • macandrew
    May 16, 2008
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    A nasty bit of writing but that is certainly the nature of meeting new friends.

    Good to be back.
    John


  • malmadre gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    I imagine that forms of torture haven't changed much since those early days, we just don't always hear about it on the five'o'clock news. I admit I do have thoughts of what sort of punishment that I would deal out to some, primitive in nature...I'm joking. Your writings take us down some seldom explored pathways.


  • WolfHeart
    May 15, 2008

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    Intense, with a bright bits of humor here and there. Certainly as true an account of the situation as can be written now, so far down the years.
    Stunning and brilliant work.

    Wolfie


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    I wanted this to go on...
    I am going to show it to some kids here...
    I'm curious as to what their thoughts will be...
    I'll let you know their reaction


  • NurseChilly gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    supersize me... fuck... wow..

    all this flesh and the knowledge of past wrongs and rights? maybe... maybe..

    none of it PC, but i don't believe in PC anyways... reminds me of Strange Fruit, hangin from the poplar trees...

    damned gritty write D..

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