The pains that you all feel
must be hard to bare
Chloe has not left you
she will always be right there.
Chloe is a angel
it was time for her to go
she did-not want to leave you
because she loved you so.
she will always be around you
so you will never part
as this very special angel
had a precious loving heart.
A contest entry
- #76 For anyone that's ever lost a child. by daviscth.
550 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very touching and so creative. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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That is a beautiful write to help to warm a heart that hurting... i wish you all the best in the contest
cheers
Jen
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A most beautiful & Heartfelt composition!! So-Sad!
Excellent flow of the unforced rhyming verse!
Well Done!
--Best of luck in the contest!
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oh how beautiful this is!!! I'm so thankful that I have those few memories. Lots of people don't even get that and I know we were so blessed to have her for Easter. Thank you so much for this, I just love it.
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