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You Block My Sun - I Am Number One

If your hungry its ok to eat fish cause they don't have any feelings, if your thirsty, then so am i, don't leave the tap dripping it'll make it easier for me, lights on or off, dead or alive, i will find you there is not one place you can hide
At 03:00am breathe in the air, you'll choke, this i can promise you, I will be there, now write back again without thinking, go on do it, I double dare...
Now carry on with your game that you call living, its only when you finish last you'll realise the whole time that I was winning
Without you penguin my life's a whole lot brighter oh yeah and by the way cheers for the jet lighter
You think i suck dick for packets and that i'm a crackwhore, you arse fuck dick for MS and your big dog hole is thrashed and raw
You think that you know who is worthy of my hole, everytime you speak of me i brand my satanic number into your soul (666)
Tinsi, winsi, princi and Itty bitty witty they appear very large in size but the smallest things on earth they are in my eyes, time and time again we've said our goodbyes but for some fuckin reason they just won't accept second prize
I've been up, i've been down, been to town and around, to the sky then the ground, from a half weight to a pound, racked a line, bombed a round, i've been wound up and then un-wound and your still the biggest waste of air that I have ever found, the sun's come out, your ice is melting, oh no the poor lil penguin has drowned, now us and all our families can live our life in peace, safe and sound
You think for writing this that i need help and that i'm fucked in the head, you say I make you sick, say its me you dread, when all my ammo for whats written above, has come from every word that you've said
Make the most of the final day that you'll supposedly "own" this town, the time has come, i've had enough, i'm sick of you's competing for my crown, i've been civil now for way too long we'll now prepare for your shut down, its now that the whole world is smiling and only your left standing with a frown
From the very beginning I was number one and nothings changed, i am still one we've reached the end we are now almost done
I finally got all the wonderful and its then i knew that i had won, just like i told you greasy you got nata, niente, zero you got absolutely NONE now get the fuck out of my face, for too long now you've blocked my sun
Maiden of Evil 666 is me - my unborn demonic child 333 - S. .S (Soul of Satan)

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  • Redrusty66
    May 21

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    Very nice flow and construction. Powerful imagery gives the piece a nice edge. Excellent use of vocabulary and it kept me entertained. Thanks for the read.

  • Avalin gold member
    May 17
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    This piece screams anger and I love it! It just seems to slam the senses as you're reading down through it! Although it has no real structure I think it is perfect the way it is! It's form, I believe, adds to it's strenght and angry, frustrated tone! I'd hate to be the person on the receiving end of this! Well done

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