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Weak Minds Lead the Blind -- Readable

Snickering behind hands,
Cold eyes wash over me...



Did you know I was a lesbian s|u+,
with a wig and twelve STDs?

No? Me neither.

I'm not.





Razor fingernails, slicing guts,
picking at my insides, oh so tenderly...



I roam the streets at night, pick weak fights,
and have sucked 100 --
toes.

Apparently.

I think not.





Poisonous tongues deliver repremands,
for living the right way for me...



I am the poster child for maniacs,
a call girl and a drugged-up attention seeker...

So they say.

Truth they hold not.





They say all sorts of crazy things,
taunting me 'til my ears ring.
My tears music to their ears,
using me to hide from fears.

I can not care for what they say.
Their true emotions are relayed
through the acts they use like masks,
and in their insecurities I'll bask.

They think they're doing this to me.
But right through them I can see.
For all their fickle, painful words...
the truth in their eyes is absurd.



They tease and taunt and throw things,
but this is just their way.
They're naught but -

weak,
selfish,
bleak,
hellish,
ignorant,
impure
malignant,
insecure, and

shall live lives
of
misery.

Will never grow.
























Author notes

To ForeverLastingComa
Sick contest!
Thanks for it. Hope this wasn't a mish (mission) to read. I really liked it. Please Critique.


Coma: I am sorry it still has a curse word but I did not change the poem as it was penned so well, so as I desired. Please forgive, and tell me what you think!!


To all the bullies out there:
Fuck you.

Picking on others to relieve your insecurites is WEAK.

I was bullied for two years, and most of this stems from that. The rumours are fictional -- though most have been attempted to ruin my life.

Bullies are foolish and anyone who is jealous of another should admire from a distance. If you don't like someone, stay away from them, because odds are - they're better than you. Morally. True (inner) strength.


To all those emotionally abused:
Fuck them.

Read the above, in context.



Oh, and -

the title? Gangs of bullies are lead by weak minded people, and consist of foolish and ignorant people. Again,
Fuck them.

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    May 15, 2008

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    lolz..ok then, this will close as soon as i get enough poems to satisfy me. also alert me when you are finished so i would get read it.