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Born Free

Young Elsa was a lioness,
when tame she jumped for Joy.
She caused considerable distress
once freed, she jumped at Joy.

For Adam’s-son was her mistress,
to man and wife a toy,
as in the bible all may guess, -
the spare rib brought her joy !

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Lioness Background Thomas Retterath
http://flickr.com/photos/tomsfries/1558980381/

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  • Angelicsoul gold member
    June 13

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    Clever, concise, amusing - I love the biblical reference and the many layers of possible meaning it evokes.

  • frownsnfreckles
    May 15
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    what a wicked sense of humor! A very irreverent take on the prompt!