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Not Wolf, Not Man. You Made Me What I Am


Growls of those around me, snapping fangs.
humans made me what I am
seeing the light isn't anything to dread.
fearing what is unknown
is what man does.

they attack me, shove me in zoos
little do they know, I値l take over,
and kill those who did this to me.

I知 not a savage, I知 just what you created
I may look like a wolf, but I知 still me inside.

Returning to friends to family...
they run in terror, they don稚 see who I am
I wont harm you, but still you shot at me.

I hide in the forests, forced to be alone
the wolves shun me, for I知 not one of them.

Smelling of hume and of beast
what can I do! Nothing will be with me
no companion, not hume or beast.

I snap at the moon wishing, I was but a werewolf
preying I could change back, for but a day.

But, even the moon laughs at me.
How many more will be changed like me?
How many other creatures will you make?
The government will use us to take over.

Then we will take over the government,
rid the world of the humes.
Yet, that痴 not what I want.

I want to be free, to be near my friends.
I just want to be me, is that so much to ask?

But, you had to change me!
You had to make me different!
I知 not a wolf
I知 not a man
You made me what I am


Experiment number 100683

All I can do is wonder why.
I can speak as clearly as any hume
I can see better than any wolf.
I can hear like a wolf

I have the fur and the face of the wolf
but the shape of a man.
My legs maybe stronger
And I may look more wolf than man!
But cant you see!

I'm a human I知 trapped..
I'm trapped by your fear.

I may have all the aspects of the wolf
but no one will ever see, the human side of me.

Author notes

this contests fits right in to my story i've been writing, LOLLIPOPS WHOOO HOOO

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  • Little Blue Bird
    May 16, 2008

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    Amazingly Awesome

    OH! My Blitz! This is one of your best writings so far. I love it, love it, love it!!! I am in awe. Beautiful, my "pet". Love you.


  • XxTiggerxX
    May 15, 2008

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    BLITZ I love it =] very much =]

    *howlz* WELL WRITTEN UR GONNA BEAT ME IN THAT CONTEST FO SHOW lolz owell i got beaten by class lolz

    xoxooxox


    • wolf
      May 15, 2008
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      naw your peom was more powerful i'm sure your poem would win.


  • B u b b l e s h
    May 15, 2008
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    Uhm...

    no.

    not happenin.


  • BastMoon
    May 15, 2008
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    *howls and yips*


  • LadyOfFate
    May 15, 2008

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    pretty good, thanks for entering. it does fit in my contest. You just forgot about the lollipops in the notes. fix that and I will be a happy camper with this. thanks for entering and good luck

    • wolf
      May 15, 2008
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      LOL I PUT LOLLIPOPS IN THE WRONG SPOT SORRY

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