shades faded away as they
drifted down into a hidden well
from memories past
that were once shared .
Now lost in the shadows
sailing the sea unknown hope.
Author notes
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"There Is No Box"
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A contest entry
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Comments
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Lovely imagery and deeply emotional piece...very nicely done...with so much strength in brevity...
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Once again, your imagery here plays a part. I find you a very 'deep' writer, from what I have read so far. Your pieces hold meaning which are strong. And also emotion too. This piece here was, sad too, I felt the desolation.
With Dark Love
Wayne Leon
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the imagery is abundant. I always love works that use shadows and let my mind play among them. thank you so much for your entry.
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Short, but with an abundance of imagery---Well Done!
Best of luck in the contest!
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