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Lie to me and I'll keep loving you

Paint me beautiful with colorful lies, look into my eyes

And make me believe I could be more
Than your late night telephone whore

The one you call when you have nothing better to do
When there’s no one hotter to screw

When you just want to Waste some time,
Pretending that you're mine.

Give me paper wings and promise me I can fly
And I’ll jump for you,
From any height

I'll walk the wire, and not fear the fall
Because even a moment of happiness is better than nothing at all

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  • refinnej
    August 27, 2009

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    wow i really like this. Sometimes we just want to feel wanted even if we know it is not true...still in that moment it feels that way.

  • SadmanJim
    March 20, 2009

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    Incredible

    Wow, it almost make me want to cry for the protagonist. I say "almost", 'cause big boys don't cry in public.
    Seriously, this is a terrific write, and I want to hear Melissa Ethridge sing it! Thank you for sharing your gifts with us.

    Write On!
    jIM


  • Kuroi
    July 5, 2008

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    lovely

    Amber it has been awhile since I have been on AP but
    I got an e-mail from here so I decided to sign on again. This is just lovely. My favorite part is the Paper Wings Part. Just great Good Job as Always


  • Joseph Montelongo
    June 22, 2008

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    Interesting

    I like it... it flows and you can really get into the emotion of it... I dont konw if it was intentional or not but I get a lot of desperation from it


  • lively banter
    May 15, 2008
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    you're such a girl

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