A bud in dawn lit dew,
watched
how each petal
takes its hue,
unfurling gently,
like the folds of my heart
fluttering to novel tunes,
unaware soul,
blossoming in love.
Author notes
pic: caroline's patience by Tremor
A contest entry
- PIF 2 Prompts by jasminerose.
1050 points, ended May 24, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely emotion, beautiful metaphor and imagery! An excellent piece of poetry!! Thank you for entering:D Jasminerose:f
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Aww this is just lovely hun! We do blossom under love!
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Thanks ...glad you like it dear!
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this is beautiful auntie
love you -
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Thanks a lot!
many for a pretty lady!
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excellent from loving heart 'behanji'..nectar of pure heart
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Thanks a lot brother...
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