My thoughts are racing
Full of the fears I've been facing
Your rejection
Eats away at me like an infection
Your always on my mind
Searching for answers I can't seem to find
Author notes
Sorry...I'm off by three words. I hope that's okay
A contest entry
- Me+Love=Pain part 2 by TheQuietStorm.
300 points, ended June 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a very nice piece...i live the flow of it. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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wow. keeping it short like you have adds so much more impact and power. I love how you leave mystery for the reader to think about.
great write.
All the best
~Hollow~ -
I like this poem. It gets right down to the point. I love how you made it very short, but still so effective!!!!! Good Job writing this one.
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