This poor lady
is tired indeed.
Sleep I must have
to set my soul free...
Waiting forever
for people to move.
Crashing was hard
when I hit that groove...
Totaled...
Author notes
a little fun...
This is the prompt.
Credit to:
http://bohso15.deviantart.com/art/fifteen-minutes-85693947
Its a little different from usual...
But can take it from many angles, either the people in the car, the fireman, or write about the after effects and how it effected peoples families or the people or whatever...use your imagination =]
A contest entry
- Quickie!! =] by LeilaJayne.
450 points, ended May 15, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
Excellent!!
The message is clear here! I'd just want to go home and sleep this one away. Great job hun! Don
-
Gosh ... tired, yep, that'll do it as well. Like the change in gears at the break.
Steve
-
Great take on the prompt, well penned. Thanks for entering x
-
Lol.. very creative and welled penned take on the prompt my friend. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
-
Yep.. that's what happened in my accident too!! Tho I wasn't the driver lol...
Love your write hun!
-
Wonderful work here my friend!
Best of luck to you in this
contest and thanks a lot for
sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
I like it.
Good night.
-
Good luck to you too hun.. then get some sleep ok! lol
-
You too dear!
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
